Six Sentence Sunday #16: Forsaking the Prize

Another lovely Sunday has rolled around. Where has the week gone? I’m continuing with snippets from my current WIP, Forsaking the Prize. This is another example of how utterly problematic Tobias Randall is for Blythe’s peace of mind.

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The door swung fully open. “You can’t leave until your name is cleared. Neither can I, for that matter,” Tobias Randall added cheerfully.

Blythe glanced at him and looked away quickly, fighting to keep a blush from her cheeks. Tobias Randall had come to add his tuppence worth to the discussion but was only dressed in a sheet. How typical of his type of man.

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18 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday #16: Forsaking the Prize

  1. Ryan March 25, 2012 at 10:10 am #

    Typical yes, but not stupid! Lol Fun six, Heather!




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  2. Teresa Cypher-Willowlive March 25, 2012 at 1:18 pm #

    I like it! The last line made me chuckle… Well done!




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  3. Ceri Hebert March 25, 2012 at 11:12 pm #

    Dressed in a sheet? Intriguing! Great job. 🙂




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  4. Donna Cummings March 26, 2012 at 12:19 am #

    LOL — this is great fun. I love Tobias and his cheerfulness. And his clothing choice. 🙂




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  5. Paula Martin March 26, 2012 at 12:29 am #

    How intriguing – dressed only in a sheet?




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  6. Sue March 26, 2012 at 1:36 am #

    Well, what kind of sheet? plain ? floral? king size? – yeah would have to be king sized 😀




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  7. veronicascott March 26, 2012 at 1:52 am #

    Love the way this snippet ended, left me dying for MORE! Well done 🙂




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  8. angela quarles March 26, 2012 at 2:00 am #

    I agree, loved this snippet– you’ve done a great job catching his character here!




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  9. Candice Bundy March 26, 2012 at 3:15 am #

    Haha! Love his clothing choice, by his knowing smile certainly chosen just to see the lovely blush upon her cheeks. Fab six!




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    • Heather Boyd March 26, 2012 at 2:12 pm #

      He didnt honestly have much of a choice. His brother had appropriated his clothes but underestimated just how far Tobias would go to join in on the conversation.




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  10. sarahballance March 26, 2012 at 4:21 am #

    Oooh, I like him already! What a great six!




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  11. Sabrina Garie March 26, 2012 at 4:36 am #

    Great six. You can really feel her discomfort. He’s definitely someone I’d like to get to know.




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  12. gayleramage March 26, 2012 at 6:37 am #

    Ooh, intriguing! Back for more next week! 😀




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  13. gzidar March 26, 2012 at 11:10 am #

    Nice six, makes me want to know more about their relationship and what is going on.




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  14. Lorraine Paton March 26, 2012 at 11:40 am #

    Intriguing six! Sounds like she has gotten herself into quite a predicament. 🙂




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  15. Heather Boyd March 26, 2012 at 2:23 pm #

    Thanks everyone for the feedback on my current wip. To avoid potential spoilers, I’m shifting to another story next week. :o)




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