Six Sentence Sunday #17: One Wicked Night

It’s a beautiful Sunday downunder, and I may have my aching tooth under control finally. (Touching every piece of wood I can find)  This week I’m turning back time to my first published short story, One Wicked Night. One Wicked Night is the story of a heartbroken man who accepts an courtesan’s invitation to join her one night and gets way more than he bargained for. This is from the chapter one. Enjoy!

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Time stood still as he gazed at the bejeweled impure.

Rumors and innuendo did not do her justice. She glided toward him with sleek, dark-haired perfection. Benedict noticed the challenge in her eyes, as if she expected something from him instead of the other way around. The second, and not the least important, her gown floated in transparent drifts about her. He could see the delicate turn of her leg and the dipping curve of her waist as she passed before candlelight.

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22 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday #17: One Wicked Night

  1. Ryan April 1, 2012 at 1:26 pm #

    Wow, I like the vivid and sensual description, and the scene is very intriguing.




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  2. Ceri Hebert April 1, 2012 at 10:00 pm #

    Beautiful description. I definitely would want to read more. The title is enough to draw me in!




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  3. Donna Cummings April 1, 2012 at 11:27 pm #

    This is lovely. I like the challenge in her eyes, and how it intrigues him as much as her physical beauty.

    I’m glad you’re feeling better too!




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    • Heather Boyd April 2, 2012 at 9:03 pm #

      Thanks Donna. Not completely good yet but getting there.




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  4. Candice Bundy April 2, 2012 at 12:37 am #

    Interesting. Here you definitely see how entranced he is with her. Great six!




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  5. Sue April 2, 2012 at 2:48 am #

    I have tooth problems too – yeah a pain and as to your snippet – who sasys sexy has to be undressed – your description is sooo sensual – which to me is better – so well done




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    • Heather Boyd April 2, 2012 at 9:13 pm #

      Ah no. Another sore tooth sufferer. You have my condolences and wishes for a speedy recovery, Sue. Glad you like my six. I’m pretty proud of my first story.




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  6. Lorraine Paton April 2, 2012 at 2:50 am #

    I love this line: her gown floated in transparent drifts about her. What a beautiful description. Definately an intriguing six and premise! 🙂




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  7. Gemma Parkes April 2, 2012 at 3:45 am #

    Beautiful writing, l love the descriptions you use, ‘glided toward him with sleek dark haired perfection’ wonderful!




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  8. angela quarles April 2, 2012 at 3:55 am #

    Beautiful description!!




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  9. Carly Fall April 2, 2012 at 4:48 am #

    Glad you’re feeling better. Wonderful description – beautiful six!




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  10. Ursula Grey April 2, 2012 at 5:11 am #

    Excellent six – very nicely done! On my tbr list!




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  11. sarahballance April 2, 2012 at 8:41 am #

    What a beautiful description! Heck, I think *I* love her at first sight! ;c)




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  12. Alix Cameron April 2, 2012 at 10:54 am #

    Magnificent description!




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    • Heather Boyd April 2, 2012 at 9:23 pm #

      Thanks for dropping in, Alix. Glad you enjoyed my six.




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  13. Kate Warren April 2, 2012 at 11:58 am #

    You have a wonderful way with details, Heather. Awesome six!




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  14. jeanettelgrey April 2, 2012 at 12:26 pm #

    Nice description. Hope the tooth feels better!




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  15. gzidar April 3, 2012 at 7:03 pm #

    Great work, beautifully written and evokes a sensual imagery. Just lovely.




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