Six Sunday #34 Forsaking the Prize Part 4

Is it Sunday already? Wow this week has really flown by. Thanks for dropping by my blog. It’s time for another Six Sunday Post from Forsaking the Prize. We continue on from last Sunday’s post but if you need a recap,  click here to start reading from the beginning.

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Leopold pushed him (Tobias) across the room until he stood between a set of mirrors. He could see himself from all angles. Every pain he’d suffered was before his eyes. White scars crisscrossed his back, flexing under his muscles in a way that even he found repulsive. He turned from the view. “As expected.”

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14 Responses to Six Sunday #34 Forsaking the Prize Part 4

  1. Patricia Preston October 14, 2012 at 2:05 pm #

    Great description. Loved a scarred man!




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  2. Carrie Crain October 14, 2012 at 2:30 pm #

    A mirror does not lie. I think Leopold has found Tobias’ weakness. Nice!




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  3. Gemma Parkes October 14, 2012 at 10:40 pm #

    Aw, l feel sorry for him! must read the build up to this point!




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  4. Siren A. Star October 15, 2012 at 1:36 am #

    This is a great scene!




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    • Heather Boyd October 15, 2012 at 12:16 pm #

      Tried to comment on your SSS blog but .. failed to prove I’m human. Sorry.




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  5. Tonya Burrows October 15, 2012 at 2:17 am #

    Poor guy. Wonder what happened to him.




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  6. veronicascott October 15, 2012 at 2:53 am #

    I feel so sorry for Tobias but I admire his resolve. Excellent excerpt, really caring about this character!




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  7. ChristineWarner October 15, 2012 at 2:58 am #

    He has external and I’m sure internal scars…nicely done!




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  8. Sue October 15, 2012 at 3:25 am #

    Looking forward to what we learn about the scars and how the story is taken and if it affects the relationship




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  9. Elin Gregory October 15, 2012 at 8:33 am #

    Very good scene. Again there’s a big difference between Leopold’s unharmed outrage and Tobias’ resignation.




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  10. Lorraine Paton October 15, 2012 at 9:09 am #

    Aw… poor guy. I hate that he finds his scars repulsive. I hope he finds someone who can see past all that.




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  11. Sandra Sookoo October 15, 2012 at 1:02 pm #

    But at least he accepts himself as he is. Refreshing to find that 🙂




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  12. Donna Cummings October 16, 2012 at 3:36 am #

    He definitely has my sympathy. I admire his resolve — and I’m looking forward to his encounters with his heroine. 🙂




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  13. Stevie Carroll October 17, 2012 at 7:29 am #

    I’m looking forward to learning the backstory to all this.




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